The face, for starters, is gorgeous. I don't think you could have wished for a better face. The foreshortening looks good. The only reason that the perspective looks a little strange is because all parts of the drawing are in focus. If the hand was coming out to the camera like it is, then the hand furthest back would be either blurry, or a less prominent color.

Like, if you have very vivid color in the front, then parts in the rear might be less vivid. It would make that front hand pop out more. It's something to give a shot, anyway.

All and all, great work! ^_^

I love the face, legs are a tad large for me, but her abs are really cool! ^_^

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I liked. it ^_^

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Nice work, did you use any reference?

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Hmm..thanx for the comments!
Thats some nice insight Ryokai. Maybe ill go back and mess around with teh colors on the pic in teh future. I kinda only used three levels of shading to color it. Though not sure if i wanna mess with the blur filter ill see how that goes

Still thanx for the help

Ye, I know i was kinda just sketching and everything just fit. Didnt pull back and realize it was off till i was coloring it in photoshop and just wasn't assed to fix it.

Ye ye, just goin through the archives. Once i get some new material i post ok